Monday, 16 May 2016

Poetic memoir

The beach was usual enough; it had
A sea, beach, sun, hills
Surrounding it, and even a stone wall 
I never went to. Talan and I 
Did what boys do - dozed in the hot 
Water spa, scuba dived round the rock 
Pools, climbed the rocks, swam 
And fished at South Bay 
Doing nothing important.

2 comments:

  1. That would be cool swimming around the rocks

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  2. I liked how you chose the beach and I like how you talked about the stone wall

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