Monday, 16 May 2016

Poetic memoir

The beach was usual enough; it had
A sea, beach, sun, hills
Surrounding it, and even a stone wall 
I never went to. Talan and I 
Did what boys do - dozed in the hot 
Water spa, scuba dived round the rock 
Pools, climbed the rocks, swam 
And fished at South Bay 
Doing nothing important.


  1. That would be cool swimming around the rocks

  2. I liked how you chose the beach and I like how you talked about the stone wall